User:Elbert Ainsteinium/Michael reaction/Chlorinetwist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elbert Ainsteinium, Sach548, Kat3r1nayr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elbert Ainsteinium/Michael reaction


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Michael reaction

Lead

 * lead is not part of updates
 * it may be useful to update the lead to reference the new "Applications" section your group is working on

Content

 * updated the "Definition" section to include correct citations and more examples of nucleophiles
 * group has a good plan to group article's content into a main section called "Examples"; I think this will make the article more cohesive
 * good plan for new "1,6 Michael Addition" example; group will follow similar format to other examples already in the article
 * good plan for new "Applications" section
 * I agree that cancer drugs or other medications would be interesting examples to include; it could be under a subheading called "Michael Reaction in Drug Synthesis" since you already have another subheading for the polymerization application
 * "Michael Reaction in Polymerization Reactions" seems to have a lot of good content planned
 * Relevant sources used

Tone and Balance

 * Sections have a neutral tone
 * Nothing in the article seems to be overpowering other sections; the applications section mostly has information about polymerization but it seems that the group is still working on fleshing that section out to include more

Organization

 * this is a little hard to tell at this point, since most work is still in bullet points
 * the edits seen in the "Definition" section are well-written
 * the plans to organize the different types of Michael reactions into one heading called "Examples" is a really good idea to make the article more organized

Images and Media

 * group still needs to add images for mechanisms

Overall Impressions

 * great plan for reorganizing the article
 * "Applications" section will be a great addition to the article - it will show why this reaction is useful
 * just gotta turn some bullet points into sentences and add the mechanisms!