User:Elbert Ainsteinium/Michael reaction/Ymukohya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elbert Ainsteinium, Kat3r1nayr, Sach548


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elbert Ainsteinium/Michael reaction


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Michael reaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

First of all, I really liked that you guys pasted the original paragraph and then edited version below so its easier to compare and add on!

Also, the structure of the articles is very well organized and clear. Under Applications and Michael Reaction in Polymerization reactions, section number makes it easier to read and the length seems qual to its importance to the article's subject. Adding some images for common polymers and monomers would help too.

For definition section, all content is relevant and clear. The edited version is more detailed and well written. I would suggest expanding a little bit more on Mukaiyama-Michael addition section since it has less content compared to other sections.