User:Elid 389/Elizabeth Watasin/Whizkid32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elid 389


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elid%20389/Elizabeth_Watasin?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Concise and to the point, gave me all the summarized information I needed to know. I really recommend adding an info box with birth, age, location born, etc. to the righthand side. I suggest adding connecting links to a lot of the studios you mentioned, as well as in other sections of your article.. When you say she helped produce all those films- was she animating them or in a different position?

Early Life:

Make don't forget to cite facts, especially if it sounds like an opinion (but actually isn't, if that makes any sense).

I would make a separate section for awards she got, and provide connecting links for them.

Overall, very informative and detailed. Could be organized a bit better, but overall very good.