User:ElijahBorges/Jean Lafitte/Vin2513 Peer Review

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 * Peer Review

In reviewing ElijahBorges work I have to say I was enjoying the read for a change because I myself am not a big fan of reading so I was pleasantly supirsed that I enjoyed it so much, with that being said I have some feedback.


 * I very much enjoy how at points it could tell a broader story, but it always comes back to the main focus which I believe to be crucial in a project like this.
 * There was a lot I did not know about the aftermath of the War of 1812 and gaining new knowledge is always good.
 * Quotes from historical figures are great sources of information
 * With being said, I would have liked more information, not because there wasn't enough, because I am hooked on the topic and am wanting more.


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The edited changes provide valuable insight to the main topic at hand. It adds a certain element to the article the will grasp the readers attention and have them keep reading. The bibliography and sources used were professional and sound