User:ElijahBruin/Frida Larios/Srodriguez132 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ElijahBruin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ElijahBruin/Frida Larios


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:ElijahBruin/Frida Larios

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is very detailed and has a great information on background of the artist. It has a neutral tone and seems to have sources from magazines the artist was featured in. My main concern is formatting that they could break this to even more sections so it is easier to read such as splitting it to an education and early life since there is a lot of information. Having it in the current format really takes away from the focus because it is one big chunk of information. Other than that so far so good!