User:Eliotwilliams10/Climbing/Lborchardt2003 Peer Review

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Elliotwilliams10


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 * Climbing


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The Lead is direct and straight to the point. It does not go on for too long. The content seems to be up to date because there is information relating to climbing being added as an Olympic sport in the year 2021. There aren't any claims that are made that seem opinionated throughout the article.The sources at the bottom of the article look to be current for the most part as a few of them are from 2019. The content is clear and concise, and it is easy to read and not too bulky. The images throughout the article are interesting and well captioned. They definitely add a bit to the article. I would say that the information added makes it more complete.