User:Eliseforget/Veterinary anesthesia/Morgan098 Peer Review

General info
Eliseforget
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eliseforget/Veterinary anesthesia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Veterinary anesthesia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I think the content added really helps put everything together, I like that a lot of examples were added and it helps establish reliability for the article
 * I think it would be better if the citations were labeled/repeated more in the levels of sedation section since there is a lot of space without a source
 * The content is reliable and neutral
 * Good sources
 * I like the new organization and I think it flows a lot better
 * Really good, so much information added
 * Even though I agree, I think the sentence saying "proper equipment should be employed for optimal care" may be persuasive