User:Eliseleroi/Mink/Elijah Whalen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eliseleroi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eliseleroi/Mink
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mink

Evaluate the drafted changes
I honestly feel that there isn't a whole lot to add, here. This is a great and notable addition to the article, and one that I'm surprised isn't already included. The sources are useful, and the tone is neutral. I wonder if adding a sentence to the lead paragraph might be warranted, talking about Mink's role in the spread of COVID-19. This definitely isn't absolutely needed, but it could be used to provide additional information about why some consider mink farms to be unethical.

I think you should add a sentence talking about how permanent the mink ban is. Because it was spurred by COVID-19, I was unsure if this is a temporary ban while the country deals with the pandemic, or if this was a permanent change which was brought to light by the pandemic. It should only need a sentence or two.

Lastly, I think that sources 3 and 4 in your References tab would only be accessible to OU students. I think that you're just using the references to temporary hold a link for now, and planning to add a proper citation later. If so, no worries, I just thought I'd mention it.