User:Elizabeth Ana/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Incarceration of women

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this because it relates to my topic of gender inequality in women who are incarcerated. This matters because there needs to be more talked about this topic than there is. At first look I can see some spots that I could add too but over all it looks like a pretty good place to start.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

I think the lead is pretty good it talks about the prison population as a whole, and move it into talking about women. It looks like there are some spots to update or for sure add to the content. The article seems to have a neutral tone. There are some sources that need to be added to this page. I think that the organization could be a little better and there could be a better flow to the article. The pictures are very few and they aren't high quality. Looking at the talk page there is talk of adding to the history and updating some sloppy research that there is. This article is a very solid start I think I can add some good information to this article to add to the information that is already there. There are sections started for each of my topics, but there are things I can add and I didn't see anything on education so I can add on to that as well.