User:Elizabethmalley/Houston toad/Bush 007 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Elizabethmalley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elizabethmalley/Houston toad


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Houston toad

Evaluate the drafted changes
One thing that I noticed off the bat was the big link. There are ways to simplify the link or link it in the text. I thought that it was very appropriate to add an update of the progress of the conservation efforts. I thing that I do think that could be added to this page is a lot more about the everyday life of the toad. I think the characteristics category could be broken up into multiple different sections such as reproduction, diet, lifecycle, etc. These categories could be expanded upon as well.

The addition of multiple more images to show their range and more characteristics would also be a major improvement.

I think that the source you added is a good and pretty recent source. It just needs to be properly added to the document