User:Elizabethpopoff/User:Elizabethpopoff/Affogato/Allie partridge Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Elizabethpopoff
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Elizabethpopoff/Affogato

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes, the lead has been updated with new content.


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes, the first sentence is clear and concise.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * The bulk of the article is the lead. Therefore no other section is mentioned.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No, the lead does not include information that is not presented in the article.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The lead is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes, all the added content is relevant to the topic.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, all the content is up-to-date.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * There is not content that is missing or does not belong.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * No, the article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes, all the added content is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No, there are no biased claims.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No, there are no over represented/underrepresented viewpoints.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No, the content does not attempt to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * All new content is backed up by sources, however some of these sources are blogs which may or may not be reliable.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * I believe they do reflect the available literature on the topic.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes, the sources are current.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * The sources are written, by many different people from many different cities. The authors do not include historically marginalized individuals, however I do not think that is important for this specific article.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes, all links work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes, all content is well-written and easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No, the content does not have any spelling/grammatical errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes, the content is well organized. It may be helpful to add another section describing presentation of the dessert.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * n/a
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * n/a
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * n/a
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * n/a

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * n/a
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * n/a
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * n/a
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * n/a

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes, I believe the add content helps the reader further understand an Affogato.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The new content helps the reader understand the presentation of the dessert, which varies from the presentation of most desserts.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * I think the content can be further improved by breaking some of the information into a section other than the lead.