User:ElizabethrKelly/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Horse Park of New Jersey
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is very short and could use more detail. The content is relevant to the topic. The lead gives a short background and states what will be in the rest of the article. The content was last updated in 2020 but is still relevant and up to date. The tone is very neutral and informative. There is one photo and also a link to take readers to the parks website.
 * This article is very short and could use more detail. The content is relevant to the topic. The lead gives a short background and states what will be in the rest of the article. The content was last updated in 2020 but is still relevant and up to date. The tone is very neutral and informative. There is one photo and also a link to take readers to the parks website.


 * Refrences
 * About Our Community Archived 2013-10-29 at the Wayback Machine Upper Freehold. Accessed October 28, 2013.
 * ^ Collins, Helen Lippman; Reardon, Patricia. "FOR EQUESTRIANS, EVERY DAY IS A DAY FOR RIDING OR PRACTICING", The New York Times, November 1, 1987. Accessed October 28, 2013. "Horse Park, in Upper Freehold Township, is a project of the state's Equine Advisory Board. When completed, it will be a first-class facility for competitive horsemanship, complete with outdoor show rings, seats for a large group of spectators, a polo field and jumping and steeplechase courses."
 * ^ Horse Park of New Jersey, Get Outside NJ. Accessed October 28, 2013.

Option 2

 * Alpha Delta Pi
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has a good amount of detail and writing. It does not really need much added to it. The lead section does a good job of introducing the topic and describing what the article will look like. The content is all relevant to the topic and gives good information. The tone is neutral and not biased. The writing is professional and feels legitimate.
 * This article has a good amount of detail and writing. It does not really need much added to it. The lead section does a good job of introducing the topic and describing what the article will look like. The content is all relevant to the topic and gives good information. The tone is neutral and not biased. The writing is professional and feels legitimate.


 * Sources
 * ^ Name similarity to Alpha Delta Phi fraternity, formed as a men's organization in 1832 is merely coincidental.
 * ^ "Alpha Delta Pi – History". Alpha Delta Pi Executive Office.(There were over 20 sources there are just the first few)

Option 3

 * Pittstown, New Jersey
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead section of this article is very well detailed and gives evidence as to what the rest of the article will look like. There could be a little more detail added in right after the lead section but the rest of the article is well balanced. There are plenty of pictures and attractions about the area in the following parts of the article.
 * The lead section of this article is very well detailed and gives evidence as to what the rest of the article will look like. There could be a little more detail added in right after the lead section but the rest of the article is well balanced. There are plenty of pictures and attractions about the area in the following parts of the article.


 * Sources(not all of them)
 * Zip Codes, State of New Jersey. Accessed November 21, 2015.
 * ^ Locality Search, State of New Jersey. Accessed June 9, 2016.
 * ^ The Township of Franklin, Hunterdon County, New Jersey. Accessed January 1, 2015. "Villages and hamlets in Franklin are Cherryville (Dogtown until 1856), Quakertown (sometimes called Fairview between 1834 and 1856) and Pittstown (Hoffs until the late 1700s), which also is partly in Alexandria and Union Townships."

Option 4

 * The Office (American TV series)
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article was all around very well written. There was barely anything that needed to be added or changed. It was interesting to see this article after looking at some others ones because it shows what a well written article looks like. The tone and balance is very professional and gives a lot of background and information.
 * This article was all around very well written. There was barely anything that needed to be added or changed. It was interesting to see this article after looking at some others ones because it shows what a well written article looks like. The tone and balance is very professional and gives a lot of background and information.


 * Sources (over 100 sources)
 * "Shows A-Z - The Office on NBC". The Futon Critic. Retrieved June 13, 2018.

Option 5

 * Zach Bryan
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead section of this article could use a few more parts. Most of the content is just listing his songs so perhaps adding more content about his personal life or career. There are no pictures but there are external links. The tone is professional and well balanced. The reader would be able to learn the basics from this article.
 * The lead section of this article could use a few more parts. Most of the content is just listing his songs so perhaps adding more content about his personal life or career. There are no pictures but there are external links. The tone is professional and well balanced. The reader would be able to learn the basics from this article.


 * Sources
 * it won't let me paste the sources but there are over 30