User:Elizprowse/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Giada_De_Laurentiis&oldid=1011092005&diff=cur&diffonly=0

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this page to review because it was under the "articles pending review". A user updated her winning of a daytime Emmy but did not include a source. My initial impression of this article is that it is underdeveloped and unbalanced because there is a large section covering her career but other sections such as products and restaurants are not as lengthy. Overall, there is not much information covered on this page and there is plenty of room for expansion.

Evaluate the article
The article is unbalanced and needs significant additions in the "product" subsection of the "career" section. The overall tone of the article is informative and non-persuasive. The biggest shortcomings of this article is that the lead mentions information not later mentioned in the article. The lead mentions that de Laurentiis founded a catering business GDL foods and the source is cited, but it is never mentioned again in the article. There are several statements made that do not have a source cited such as "De Laurentiis became the voice of "Paulette", a character on the animated children's show Handy Manny" and mentions her line with Target but does not cite anything that proves it exists. There is also room for updated information in the "personal life" section as the last updated information about her was based in 2015. A few sources have broken links such as source 5 and source 11.