User:Elizrm/Noreen Morioka/Jujuthebean Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Elizrm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elizrm/Noreen_Morioka?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Noreen Morioka

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The draft makes mention of parts of the article that are missing or under developed such as current employment and personal life. I agree that there is a lot more that can be developed in the existing article regarding Morioka's personal life and queer identity, which is not mentioned in the article at all.