User:Elizrm/Noreen Morioka/Zseok Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elizrm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elizrm/Noreen_Morioka?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Noreen Morioka

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Some slight edits to the article lead. It makes it more general and clear.

Content

Nice additions to the "Awards & Honors." These sections are often neglected on the pages of lesser-known artists.

Some biographical information would be nice but of course not everyone has access to so much information on their artist. Overall I think a bit more information would be needed for significant edits to the article.

Tone and Balance

Tone is fairly straightforward and seems largely balanced and unbiased.

Sources and References

Good range of sources to utilize for writing. Citations are used within the text effectively.

Organization

Well organized in terms of relevance of work. Chronological order could be a good approach for

Images and MediaImages are nice but not necessarily. It's very hard to obtain images by small artists that aren't copyrighted.