User:Eljmermelstein/Big Gyp Cave Pictograph site/CarolineIRivera Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

eljmermelstein


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eljmermelstein/Big_Gyp_Cave_Pictograph_site?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Big Gyp Cave Pictograph site

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The heading named "geography" would be a perfect lead! It helps summarize the article quickly before reading in depth what it is about. It does not have an overview of what will be discussed, so a sentence or two mentioning the provided headings "history and significance", "pictographs and deterioration", "acess", "dating", "geology" and "biodiversity" could be added. The lead does not include information that isn't in the article. The lead could use another few sentences breifly describing each subtitle. It is concise and not overly detailed.

The content added was relevant. One thing I noticed was that it mentioned that the rock contained valueable information but it doesn't go into detail about what that information is.

There is a list of links but there is no reference heading. There are also no numbered citations for the references so I'm not sure which reference is supporting which claim.

The tone and blance are neutral. There is no biased language. There is good pacing and its organzed well. The article does not contain images, but if any exist of the wall markings, it would be a great addition to this article!

My overall impression of the article is that it added so much interesting information that the previous article was lacking! It was well written and have strong details. One major thing I can suggest is to get the citations in place and its just about finished.