User:Ell.S.'22/Chiquihuite cave/Sam Wege Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ell.S.'22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ell.S.'22/Chiquihuite_cave?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chiquihuite cave
 * Chiquihuite cave

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the Lead contains fine information, but I think it is strange the order in which it is presented. I would recommend saying at least a sentence or two more about what makes the site unique before the information about its elevation. And, perhaps it is worth adding a sentence or two more to introduce each subsection, especially the fact that there's some current controversy around the site.

In general, I like the content that you have proposed adding. I particularly think that the info you add for the criticism section is essential, because right now that section makes no sense. I think here you could also add a brief introduction to what exactly the controversy is about before getting into the specifics of Ardelean's criticism. That said, I think you do a great job of siting throughout and presenting only facts, not taking any sort of side in the debate. Nevertheless, perhaps it is worth adding a little talk section on the criticism, just because some people might be naturally inclined to get rid of it even though its well-written and relevant.

I wonder if there's any history around the discovery of the site or past human interaction with the site. Obviously if no one has done that research, it might be impossible for you to find, but in some ways the "history of research" section feels very incomplete.

A map or image could be a nice addition, if there's an open source one you can find.

Your sources all seem like good ones, and seem to improve upon those that are already there.

In general, I think you have a lot of strong additions and are improving the article substantially with what you have already. My biggest general suggestion would be to, once you've added your content, see if each section is sufficiently introduced. Right now, each fact and section kind of comes out of nowhere for someone who might be learning about this cave for the first time.