User:Ella311/Sarah Elmaleh/Eggen126 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ella311


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ella311/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * article does not exist.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Because there isn't an article on the subject, all information is new information. There are multiple sources, and they have included footnotes as well as links to other Wikipedia articles to increase discoverability. It is unbiased overall except for the word "problem" which suggests bias. (although i agree). More information on the actor may be helpful in giving the article more body.