User:ElleKnowsBest1922/Elections in Cameroon/CarmelBL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ElleKnowsBest1922


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ElleKnowsBest1922/Elections_in_Cameroon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elections in Cameroon

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The paragraph is well written and provides interesting facts.Check your citation because it appeared red.