User:Ellenmbruce/Rocky Mountain National Park/Plutolunar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ellenmbruce


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ellenmbruce/Rocky Mountain National Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rocky Mountain National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
I don't see a lead in your draft, but if you are adding the information about wildfire to another section I am not sure that you need one. All of your sources and content for the main body are up to date and are from reliable parties. I would like to see more information on wildfires that have happened in addition to the three you mentioned, or even just elaboration on the three. Over all I like the sandbox version. It is concise, easy to read, and well organized. I think the very last line his the only line in the whole section that has any connotation so I think you did an excellent job of remaining neutral toned. If you wanted to go the extra mile you could include an image of the area of the Fern lake fire.

https://www.nps.gov/romo/learn/news/helitanker-assists-suppression-efforts-on-the-fern-lake-fire.htm

Here is an example from the NPS that would be covered by Wikipedia rules I think. Over all I think you did great!