User:EllieTibis/The Wizard of Oz (1939 film)/Betty1324 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EllieTibis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EllieTibis/The_Wizard_of_Oz_%281939_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Wizard of Oz (1939 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would say that the lead section is easy to understand and the structure is very clear. I say that it is balanced and has reliable sources. I am not sure of the article has neutral content based on the draft, but in terms of what was published it does seems to have a neutral content.