User:Ellietuskluvr/Sterilization of Native American women

This author's judgement is noticeable, and their writing "beats around the bush" and is kind of repetitive. Grammatically it needs some improvement. There is also a lack of flow to the entire article and it seems like there isn't conviction in what information is necessary to include, and what isn't.

There is a lack of short, yet informative, sentences on mentioned contraceptives and sterilization practices. Adding this type of information could give readers the context needed to understand the topic that is being discussed.