User:Ellietuskluvr/Sterilization of Native American women/UhannahlundU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ellietuskluvr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ellietuskluvr/Sterilization_of_Native_American_women?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sterilization of Native American women

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you've identified some key issues with the article and have found ways you could improve upon the existing article.

By contributing the changes you have mentioned, it could improve the quality of the article. Consider adding more straight-forward statistical information from peer-reviewed sources. Consider adding a section that summarizes key statistical data addressing the concerns you voiced in your sandbox draft. Some potential questions you could use as guidance for adding valuable information to this article: when has this been practiced? does it continue today? What is the legal framework behind these practices? Is it explicitly illegal today? Was it explicitly LEGAL in the past?

Additionally, adding a neutral voice to the article may provide a more balanced and fact-driven tone for the article (as you mentioned in your sandbox draft).

Here is potentially useful resource/citation:Rutecki, Gregory W. "Forced sterilization of Native Americans: later twentieth century physician cooperation with national eugenic policies?" Ethics & Medicine: An International Journal of Bioethics, vol. 27, no. 1, spring 2011, pp. 33+.