User:Elliottimani/Attitude (psychology)/SomaYukihira21X Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elliottimani


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Attitude (psychology) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did a great job explaining the article in your own way. However, your edits are way too similar to the original source. The key words are the same instead of being a completely different sentence unique to you. Also, you should add some references, which will make it much easier when you publish your work live. I would leave the leading paragraph alone since it explains what attitude is in psychology really well. I would focus more on the "Change" subheading part since it a very little sources, which makes the knowledge not as reliable.