User:Ellsbells1/Speech Disorders/LBrew1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Ellsbells1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Speech disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought that she did a great job uploading the different pages to communication disorder and speech and hyperlinking their pages. She has 5 very current references that all seem extremely relevant. She did a great job having a neutral approach as well as paraphrasing the citations instead of just adding direct quotes. Her lead section is very strong and has been updated to add more content to the page and I think her section about the social effects were strong as well. Overall I think this is a great rough draft, her page has a-lot of information to be added but I think that for a first draft it is extremely strong