User:Elmcdonald180/Urban fishing/Jemanly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elmcdonald180


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elmcdonald180/Urban fishing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Urban fishing
 * Urban fishing

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far this looks pretty good to me! The information is presented in a neutral, informative way and is cited well. I would suggest adding more information about how urban fishing is performed, the history of it. etc.