User:ElmerFD/Harriet Lansing/Literally Legally Blonde Peer Review

General info
(provide username) ElmerFD
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ElmerFD/Harriet_Lansing?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Harriet Lansing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Current Article: This article is a great start. I would edit the large quote in early life and education so that it is not as long. I do not think it is wise to use such large quotations on wikipedia. Additionally, I would edit the career section so that it is much longer. There is no expansion of her specific endeavors in the law. I would divide up career into sections like "Early Career" for practicing law. "City Attorney" and "Ramsey County Municipal Court" etc. Impact on the law should also be broken up into other sections and expanded upon with more detail. It feels sparse for the accomplishments.