User:Elnhef/Environmental Epigenetics - Exposure/Epitt11 Peer Review

General info
(Elnhef, DisneyWish2023, Ellackimbrough, AlandriaC)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elnhef/Environmental_Epigenetics_-_Exposure?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this is a strong start for the topic of Environmental Epigenetic's - Exposure. The topic essentially discusses the ways in which exposure to various environmental factors can cause epigenetic changes. The examples that group members, Elnhef and DisneyWish2023, included were valuable and help to understand the information. It appears that group members Ellackimbrough and AlandriaC have not yet added anything. This is okay but they should start adding information to the article as soon as possible. More information needs to be found and then needs to be added to specific sections of the article so a flow and structure can be created. The sources found seem to be scholarly and reliable, and more sources like these should be found when adding more information to the article. Overall, more information should be added, broken up into sections, and all group members need to contribute equally.