User:Elnhef/Environmental Epigenetics - Exposure/Vjj18 Peer Review

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Environmental Epigenetics- Exposure
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Even though this is a rough draft in the group's sandbox, there is a spelling error in the first sentence of "Epigenetics." Think about explaining what dredging is for further context of how that affects the Lemon Sharks. If there are more metals that the dredging introduces to the species, then I would add them. Consider rewording the third sentence of Example 1 to specify the heavy metal that causes the DNA methylation of the juveniles. Add a little more context of how that affects its DNA. The National Library of Medicine has lots of information on heavy metal effects on plants. You can also talk about superfund sites founds close to coasts and how that can impact other ecosystems and organisms. I would talk a little bit about how these plants are able to filter out the heavy metals such as the use of bacteria. You can go into some more detail about the symbiotic relationship that the plants have with bacteria if the group is wanting a place to start to add more information. Overall, I think this is a great start to the webpage.