User:Elric Chapelon/Nonverbal Immediacy/Malamushu Peer Review

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I first posted this on the wiki's talk page but have copied it here.

Hi! I noticed many of your references are showing they were not inserted properly; my group faced this same problem. Most of the time it was because we incorrectly entered the publication date. Make sure you are writing out the month and year (ex. December 2022). Even if the source does not include an exact date, including the month and year in this format should work. Hope this helps! Malamushu (talk) 20:06, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

I also enjoyed the section that discusses the characteristics of nonverbal immediacy. This is a great way to market it and grab the reader's attention. However, I think your article could benefit from more wiki links (linking certain words to other specific wiki articles). Under the "compared to nonverbal communication" heading, try linking words such as "immediacy," "intimacy," "environment," and the broad term, "nonverbal communication."