User:Elswicc/Impressionism (literature)/Will1280 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Elswicc


 * Link to the draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elswicc/Impressionism (Literature) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Impressionism - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Pros


 * The sandbox draft offers solid, concise information and isn't overly explained.
 * Offers a great understanding of what to expect from the Impressionism Wikipedia article.
 * Gives a solid explanation of what Impressionism is.
 * Offers some reliable, influential authors from the Impressionist period.

Cons


 * Could be longer and could offer a bit more information.
 * Lacks examples of Impressionist projects.