User:Elvan302/Enrique Guerra/Crzrzc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elvan302


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elvan302/Enrique_Guerra?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Well Done.

Not sure if "by using his own unique skills" is needed.

Education: Great information.

First sentence is a run-on sentence. Try making two sentences out of that one sentence.

There is a typo on artistic.

Is 'exceptional' needed or is it trying to persuade the reader?

When mentioning someone's name for the first time you use their full first and last name, after that you refer to them by their last name only. On the second sentence try changing Enrique to Guerra.

Career: Nice work. Important content on both paragraphs.

Comma after Miguel Noreña in first sentence of first paragraph.

Great idea of creating separates paragraphs so that one can focus on his multiple works while the other focuses mainly on Las Cuarto Virtudes Cardinales.

Overall:

All content is well-written and relevant.

Great job on adding a heading, breaking each subject into its own section, the structure of the article improves as it makes it easier for the reader to read. (That is also what I included in my article.)

Links work only on blue names, not red ones such as Miguel Noreña and Jose Maria Liceaga Cornelio Ortiz de Zarate. Try adding a link from a credible source to replace the current ones on those individuals' names.

References list is accurate.