User:EmKett/Evaluate an Article

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Which article are you evaluating?
Frog thermometer

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is under the history of science umbrella and does not have much information.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is not very strong. It is a bit difficult to digest, due to it describing the device instead of first introducing it and when/why it was used. The content seems to potentially be out dated, as the most recent source is from 2001. The tone is neutral and good, stating only facts instead of bias. There are three sources, all of which are from 1991 to 2001. I am not sure if there are more current sources, but I assume there may be. There is one photo, but it does not clear up the device itself and how it would be used. Overall, it is a good start but could use a lot more information to clear up how the device is used and how it works.