User:EmKett/Matilene Berryman/ADecentNameForSure Peer Review

General info
EmKett, https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/EmKett
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:EmKett/Matilene Berryman
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Matilene Berryman

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made to the "Family" section of the article present in the sandbox are helpful and necessary. They add context to the titles and occupations that were only mentioned, but not expanded upon, in the main article previously. I appreciate that the sentences are structured well, and easy to read and follow, as well as grammatically sound. The sources added, not present in the main article, seem reliable and diverse. The tone is perfectly impartial.

It strikes me that there is no information in the main article or draft about Samuel T. Berryman, which could be a helpful addition? Aside from that, all I would continue to do would be expanding parts of the article with details omitted, as you have done thus far. The Publication section seems to be missing context, perhaps the importance of the book within her field, but your addition of it into the sandbox implies you recognized that already.