User:Ema1207/Employment discrimination/Baserballer12344 Peer Review

General info
(Ema1207)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Ema1207/Employment_discrimination&action=edit&section=3
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Lead 

the lead of this sand box draft is definitely somewhat informational. i would say it can be more detailed but for right now it is good enough for the task at hand. The article does provide information that is not in the article in a good way which makes it more in depth. The lead sentence definitely has more than enough information that gives the reader enough information to continue learning and not be confused which is a good thing.

 Content 

The content in this article is up to date and goes hand and hand with the users topic. i feel as if they hit alot of the right spots needed to get their point across to their audience.

 Sources and References 

the new content in this piece is backed up by a second reliable source. The content does reflect to the sources used in this article. the sources used in this i feel match the information and are current to the topic at hand. i feel that this user picked the best sources that really go into depth on their topic.

 Overall Impressions Overall i felt that the information in this was good and very informative. The user can work on stretching this out alittle more and going more into depth about certain things but other than that it works.