User:Emachado98/Brentwood, California/Rosebud2424 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emachad098


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emachado98/Brentwood%2C_California?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brentwood, California

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Added the original lead form the article to help give ideas for future edits. Original lead could use more info tat does not just talk about the number of people in the population in Brentwood. I'm sure you have many ideas and I believe you are on your way to making great edits.