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Individual Implementation Plan: Characters Page and Synopsis
For this wikipedia assignment I will be editing the character descriptions for Belarius and Pisanio. In terms of the synopsis, I will be adding in information about the mole on Imogen's body (since right now the synopsis only mentions her being partly naked). Likewise, I will be adding in a link to the British monarchy where the synopsis mentions "the British throne" (in the first paragraph), just in case readers of the article want an easier way to get information about this topic. The person in my group who checked over my edits was Mariam. She certified that everything looked good. Additionally, to help out the 'Performance History' group, my team and I have decided to work on adding citations for the more modern productions of Cymbeline. Thus, I added three citations to different modern play references within the wiki article that were not already cited.

Below outlines in detail the exact edits I will be making to the Characters and Synopsis portions of the Cymbeline article, as well as the Performance History section:

Characters

Belarius – banished lord living under the name Morgan; he stole King Cymbeline's two sons as an act of retaliation for his banishment

Pisanio – Posthumus' servant, loyal to both Posthumus and Imogen; he unknowingly gives a sleeping drug to Imogen, believing this drug to be medicine from the Queen.

Synopsis

the British Throne

He also takes note of the room, as well as the mole on Imogen's partly naked body, to be able to present false evidence to Posthumus that he has seduced his bride.

Performance History

There have been some well-received major theatrical productions including 1998's Public Theater production in New York City directed by Andrei Șerban. Cymbeline was also performed at the Cambridge Arts Theatre in October 2007 in a production directed by Sir Trevor Nunn.

In 2016, Melly Still directed Cymbeline at the Royal Shakespeare Company. This version of the play was performed at the Royal Shakespeare Theatre before moving to the Barbican in late 2016. The performance featured Bethan Cullinane as Innogen and Gillian Bevan as Cymbeline.

Article Evaluation
The article I have chosen to evaluate is that of Sarah J. Maas. For the most part, this article is fairly unbiased and informative on the topic (i.e. author Sarah J. Maas) however there are certain spots of the article that could use improvement. For instance, the description of the author states that 'she is best known' for certain novels she has written. 'Best' implies a biased viewpoint and is not supported by any citations that would lead one to stronger evidence showcasing that most people know her from these specific novels rather than other books. The article is also lacking in appropriate citations for certain sections, such as the section on the Author's Education. In this part of the article, a lot of information is given regarding where the author attended college and what major and minor she graduated with, however, there are not citations to support any of these specific facts. Similarly, the section on the author's Personal Life is missing citations for information regarding the date her child was born as well as the date when the author made the announcement. Furthermore, some citations (even when they are given) display incorrect information about the author. For instance, the author's listed works are said to include the novel 'Twilight of the Gods', however, the citation that is supposed to provide support for this information (citation [30 ]) does not actually provide evidence that Sarah J. Maas has officially finished writing this work. In fact, the citation proves the exact opposite. The citation shows a tweet by the author who states herself that 'Twilight of the Gods' is a work in progress "WIP" rather than a finished work, thus this novel should not be included on the list of the author's works.