User:Emartinez203/Langam language/Omaralattar23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emartinez203, Muh tee us?, Brian Del Valle, Lizkants


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emartinez203/Langam_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pondi language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the drafted changes made to the article are well organized in terms of grammar, citations and organization. I think the tables used to display vowels, consonants, etc. were very clear and concise as well. However before the charts, I think the two line of texts that stated a small amount of information about the language needed to be a bit longer. I think a small amount of background knowledge could go a long way as well. I think in general, the draft feels slightly incomplete.