User:Embalming Agent/Adult Protective Services/Faith211 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Embalming Agent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Embalming Agent/Adult Protective Services - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adult Protective Services - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the lead there have been no new information added. I think if you add more information this can help your article more and I think you can find information that will go more in dept of what "Agent/Adult Protective Services" is. All the content is backed up with reliable sources from the texts. I believe this content is very clear and easy to read. I would start to add more detail in the lead and then start writing more in the "Article Body" paragraph.