User:Emedmunds/Valerie Montgomery Rice/Queenb8 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emedmunds


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 * User:Emedmunds/Valerie Montgomery Rice


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Valerie Montgomery Rice

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I thought these edits and this draft was done very well. There is plenty of information that is new or more explained from the original article which is great. The article is neutral, there are sources that backup the information. If there was one thing I would add, it would be maybe more of her early life. I know you talked about her education, but is there anything that can be found about her childhood or maybe where she grew up? I think this would strengthen the context of the article in terms of where she came from and where she is now with all of her accomplishments. She is a very accomplished and decorated individual as well as a women of color.