User:Emehrabani/Umbilical granuloma/R. Dela Cruz, UCSF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emehrabani, L. Martinez future PharmD, Romaseo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Umbilical granuloma


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Umbilical granuloma

Lead
The lead has been updated to replace jargon, such as neonates. The lead is concise and introduces the topic clearly to the reader.

Content
The content added is relevant and up to date.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral and does not contain any bias. There is no attempt at persuading the reader in favor of one position over another.

Sources and References
The content is backed up by secondary sources and reflects what the sources say. The sources are current and the links to the cited sources work.

Organization
The content is concise, clear, and easy to read with good grammar. The content is broken down into clear sections.

Images and Media
The article does not yet include any images.

Overall Impressions
Overall, the information added to the article helps the reader gain a better understanding of the topic and adds to the completeness of the article. The content added is useful at defining terms and simplifying medical jargon. An improvement that can be made is to add images to back up the content.