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Article Evaluation
I did my Article Evaluation on the Wikipedia page for Diabetes mellitus.

The entire article is relevant to the topic of Diabetes mellitus. However, the section on how it can also effect animals should just be mentioned but not elaborated on. It should just be linked to another page. Due to how the article is just discussing the disease, it is written in a very neutral tone overall. The sections on research and new treatments needs to be explained upon. It should also add a section on where resources can be found for people with Diabetes mellitus. Most facts have supporting links, but not all. This seems to be a well done article as it is edited on a daily bases almost. It was a featured article candidate as well as a part of the WikiProject Medicine. This topic discuses how Diabetes mellitus effects everyone across the world, making it a global issue. Overall, this article has a concrete basis, it just has to be edited a little more.

Adding Citation
The Women's Voice Now organization has had individuals from over 174 countries participate in there annual film festival

Wikipedia Article Choice
I may change this, but I am going to focus on the Wikipedia Article Women's Voices Now. It is an american nonprofit that utilizes film to give women a voice. Women rights is a huge global issue as many women cannot express themselves. I can add the history of the organization, some events it has ran, as well as the result of those events were, and it effect of the organization. I have found a few news articles already that have covered the organization as well as the home page for them.

= Women's Voices Now Edit = Women's Voices Now (WVN) is an American not-for-profit organization with the goal of advocating women's rights through social impact films(1). The organization stated out with a annual film festival that supported international women's rights, but now includes an archive of films, their own publication, educational programs, screenings, workshops and training, as well as a scholarship (1). The organization was founded in 2010 by lawyer Catinca Tabacaru and philanthropist Leslie Sacks (3)(12).

History
The organization has been around since 2010, but its first film festival was in 2011(13). Every festival has the a theme, and the first festival's theme was "Women’s Voices from the Muslim World: A Short Film Festival"(13). The festival had over 200 films submitted from over 40 countries showcasing what life is like for women in the Muslim world (2).

2016 Film Festival Winners(15)
Fifty-three (53) films were accepted out of hundreds of submissions into the 2016 online film festival. Judges awarded best overall film and best film in each category.


 * Womb on Rent: Dir. Ishani K. Dutta
 * Voice of the Valley: Dir. Leila Jarman
 * Defendant 5: Dir. Heidi Lee Douglas
 * World Wide Women: Dir. Andra Roman
 * Mother: Prdcr. Jumaan Short
 * On the Road: Khushi's Story: Dir. American Jewish World Service, Elizabeth Daube
 * No Woman: Dir. Yama Rauf

References[edit]

 * 1) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/our-mission/
 * 2) https://www.latimes.com/la-xpm-2011-mar-22-la-et-muslim-women-films-20110322-1-story.html
 * 3) http://artdaily.com/news/65698/Leslie-Sacks--founder-and-principal-of-Leslie-Sacks-Fine-Art-and-Leslie-Sacks-Contemporary--dies-at-age-61#.XKJD5phKjIV
 * 4) http://www.peacewomen.org/content/interview-found-womens-voices-now
 * 5) https://www.voanews.com/a/online-film-competition-focuses-on-muslim-women--106699379/162358.html
 * 6) https://www.huffpost.com/entry/the-womens-voices-now-fil_b_748714
 * 7) https://medium.com/the-wvoice/about-a24dc81cda8d
 * 8) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/wvoice/2018-womens-voices-now-online-film-festival-winners/
 * 9) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/2017-film-festival/
 * 10) https://girltalkhq.com/womens-voices-now-festival-creates-awareness-womens-rights-film/
 * 11) https://www.filmfestivals.com/festival/womens_voices_now_online_film_festival
 * 12) https://observer.com/2014/12/new-kids-on-the-block-5-galleries-to-keep-yours-eyes-on-in-2015/
 * 13) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/filmfestival/2011-2/
 * 14) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/filmfestival/2014-2/
 * 15) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/filmfestival/2016-2/
 * 16) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/filmfestival/2017-2/
 * 17) http://www.womensvoicesnow.org/filmfestival/2018-2/

Scholarly Articles

https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=E87C6qTgHscC&oi=fnd&pg=PR11&dq=womens+rights&ots=nkhFi8Fwvq&sig=FqY2N5H3SidN6y2fXIstwP9pHgc#v=onepage&q=womens%20rights&f=false

https://heinonline.org/HOL/LandingPage?handle=hein.journals/hurq12&div=40&id=&page=&t=1557365146

https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=7KXvAl_s6EgC&oi=fnd&pg=PP9&dq=feminism&ots=fg0Tg-Z2wQ&sig=rnA01XoxbYkY5QPZK65bFdCEgiw#v=onepage&q=feminism&f=false

https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=7KXvAl_s6EgC&oi=fnd&pg=PP9&dq=feminism&ots=fg0Tg-Z2wQ&sig=rnA01XoxbYkY5QPZK65bFdCEgiw#v=onepage&q=feminism&f=false

http://web.a.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail/detail?vid=10&sid=92c8fb0a-3c23-4157-8514-6925b4cfc9c0%40sdc-v-sessmgr04&bdata=JkF1dGhUeXBlPWNvb2tpZSxpcCx1cmwsY3BpZCZjdXN0aWQ9ZGFuZm9ydGgmc2l0ZT1laG9zdC1saXZlJnNjb3BlPXNpdGU%3d#AN=127933063&db=aph

External links[edit]

 * Official website

Grey Power
The article seemed to be completely on topic. It might be difficult to continue to expand on the idea as it is such a narrow topic. One of the main ideas that he can expand on is how many member the party has. He can also talk about what issues they have tried to bring attention to in recent years. Overall, the introduction he has done well. The resources he has collected are good. He still needs a few scholarly sources, but he has a great base. He is writing in a neutral tone, but as it is about a political party, he will have to make sure he is not shining a positive or negative light on them. He has to add the in text citations but he has put down what information cam from where. In all, the Wikipedia page is coming along and is a big improvement one the one that already exists.