User:Emiell490/Positive psychology/Aford4706 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emiell490


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emiell490/Positive psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * "Positive psychology focuses on eudaimonia, an Ancient Greek term for "the good life" and the concept for reflection on the factors that contribute the most to a well-lived and fulfilling life. Positive psychologists often use the terms subjective well-being and happiness interchangeably." This content could easily be moved from the Lead to under the Definition subheading.
 * Its good that you're adding information about the disparities in representation of BIPOC minorities.
 * The information added in the draft seems to lack in-text citations
 * Although the reference used seems to be up-to-date and relevant, it is not widely available.