User:Emiell490/Positive psychology/Hannahchaise Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emill490


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emiell490/Positive_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Good job adding relevant information to the article about the topic!
 * Leading statement is clear and concise, and lets the reader know what they are talking about.
 * I can see how content can be seen as biased because of specific verbiage. I would change it to reflect opinions and research. You did a good job demonstrating no biases in the second paragraph by saying “It can be said that”!
 * Secondary peer reviewed literature is needed.