User:Emifri26/White feminism/Purplekevin Peer Review

Peer Review of White Feminism: Waiting for Wikipedia page.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emifri26, Emily


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emifri26/White_feminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * White feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The new content that Emily wrote in her sandbox expresses what white feminism is, and went into more detail about the matter. She included various definition and explanation of white feminism. She also went into the history of it with references to back her information up.

I loved how she used a recent reference source from 2021, to show the relevance of the article, and further prove her definitions. The information is well organized, and well thought out as well.

She discusses the problems with white feminism, and how it is affected through society. The content she incorporated improved the quality of the overall article and would be a great addition to the original Wikipedia page. They share similar information, but her draft can clearly be added to further support the information on white feminism.