User:Emigracew/Hypostomus plecostomus/Mpolit4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emigracew


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emigracew/Hypostomus_plecostomus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hypostomus plecostomus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article draft has good information on the physiology of the air breathing fish. However, where is the draft being put into the article? Is it a completely new section? This should be clarified in the draft section. Another thing, I would add is slightly more information on how the oxygen is absorbed. The draft has where the oxygen is being absorbed, but no specific mechanism. This will give more insight to how the fish's physiology is unique. And, if this is a completely new section, it will be beneficial to have a little more info.