User:Emilie.meza/Insects as food/AnNguyen1018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilie.meza


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilie.meza/Insects_as_food?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Insects as food
 * Insects as food

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Everything Emilie is contributing to the article is relevant to the article topic and there isn't any distracting information. The information is mostly neutral with no claims that are heavily biased toward a position. No viewpoints are overrepresented or underrepresented, and the language used is professional and concise. All citations used support the claims in the article and the links work well. Facts in the article are supported by reliable references from scholarly sources that are very fact-based and neutral. I'm interested in seing the bullet points listed being written into full paragraphs and I think the information being added are very reliable contributions. The content that Emilie is adding helps improve the overall quality of the article by adding relevant information.