User:Emilie.meza/Insects as food/Lingleigh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilie.meza


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilie.meza/Insects_as_food?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Insects as food

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

I think Nutritional value is a pretty succinct and accurate way to convey the information you're adding to the article.

Content:

The information you'll be adding about the nutritional benefits of eating insects definitely adds to the article as a whole. Great information that you're adding from Latin America and Mexico, I think most information about eating insects usually revolves around Africa in my experience so it's nice to see some change!

Tone and Balance:

I know you haven't formally written anything out yet but what you've got so far seems neutral, you aren't leaning towards one viewpoint over another and your viewpoint doesn't seem to be over nor underrepresented.

Source and References:

Your references look good, I was able to clink on the links and access most of them quite easily. The only reference that I wasn't able to click and be directed to from wikipedia directly was the Edible insects future prospects for food and feed security, I had to copy and paste this reference in google to actually pull the source up (not that big of a deal, more just to let you know in case you wanted to add it differently).

Organization:

It looks like you're still working on writing everything out so if you want we can meet up outside of class and help each other with the style and tone of writing it all out! Otherwise, keep it up, you're doing great!