User:Emily.Potter2198/1955 Connecticut floods/Carlymendz Peer Review

I agree with you; I think the first sentence should change to something catchier, or along the lines of "The Flood of 1955 was one of the worst floods, Connecticut has seen up to date". If it is catchier, it will grab the reader right off the back.

Also, the article itself is very small, and although there might not be much more information you can add, there could be a section where it talks about first hand accounts of people that were involved in the flood.

You can also add the effects after the fact. For example, what happened to the people that were effected?

you did a good job. There doesn't seem to be that much more that can be added to this article, however you did a good job with what you have!!