User:Emily.irvin/Nudibranch/BrittanyU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * I am peer reviewing Emily Irvin work on the Nudibranch.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emily.irvin/Nudibranch
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nudibranch
 * Nudibranch

Evaluate the drafted changes
For the first sentence about the 2,000 known species, I would suggest clarifying some of the species in which you are referring to; so that those who are reading the article can be able to produce a visual of what known species you are talking about. I would also suggest that you specify what category you are trying to add upon so that it can be better placed on the wiki page. I would advise that you get more in-depth with your information considering that some of it is very vague in details. I would suggest adding more information like: why are they found in shallow tropical waters?, what exactly about the loss of chemical defense mechanisms is being transpired? More detailing would really amplify the added information so it's not seeming so generalized. I would also suggest reviewing over the sentence structures and wording. Besides those issues, the references seem to be valid sources of your findings. Just a heads up that if any of it is apart of the source don't forget to add your in text citations as well. Overall I believe the topic and information is credible to add to wiki with the few touch-ups needed.